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1000 words - darkphoenix

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do you remember lazy summer days?
the lemonade you always used to make.
the way the mountains shimmered in the haze.
the laughter of the kids out on the lake.

do you remember autumn afternoons?
the creaking of our rockers on the porch.
the games of chess we played, the mournful loons,
the graceful dance of moths around the torch.

do you remember icy winter nights?
the shutters closed against the weather's ire.
the cosy glow when we turned out the lights.
the love we made in blankets by the fire.

do you remember mornings in the spring?
the budding of new life; the valley bloomed.
the times we woke to hear the bluebirds sing.
the church a-buzz as services resumed.

now children play but i don't hear them laugh;
the empty rockers greet the haunting cry;
the hearth is cold, my heart is torn in half.
why did you leave, my love? why did you die?
Just want to thank limnersphere and euphoria for getting together to organise this contest, and p4nth3r for providing such an evocative photo... Thanks!

I think I have managed to capture the feelings the photo evoked in me, and even incorporated most of the elements -- but I'll let you, the reader, be the judge... I won't say more; let my poetry speak for itself (or not, as the case may be... :o)

Edit, Jan 2004: I am currently working through my gallery and providing a " proper" preview image for those deviations that didn't originally have one. I apologise to all those watching me if this causes these old poems to be flagged as "new". The image in this thumbnail is Faith on the Water - Outside 2, the original inspiration for the contest and this poem. Thankyou, ~ p4nth3r, for granting me permission to use it here!
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bloodred1889's avatar
wow i really love this, its sad but has abit of truth in it for everyone.

:)