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menacing armies
angry grey storm clouds advance
across summer skies
angry grey storm clouds advance
across summer skies
Literature
Cheap and Tawdry Married Love
My mother cried when I married you.
Twisted up her brothel-keeper's mouth
and bawled-
'That girl's gone and sold herself too cheap.
...And after everything I told her!'
My aunt patted her hand
Slyly reminding her how bad the deal was,
Your poor job-prospects,
The tiny diamond on the ring
Your mother had given us
Because you couldn't afford to buy one.
I paid them no heed.
Smiling, I posed for the photos
Thankful I'd escaped.
Do you see me?
Standing there beside you
In your sharp suit and your Fagin smile.
I was innocent then,
I couldn't see the flames
But I could still burn...
Literature
FINE
Fine
Fine is the word to hide all
It is the conversation ender
It is the building blocks of illusions in the mind
Its what every one mumbles
if asked if they're alright
"I'm fine"
they lie
their heads held up high
in false pride
"I'm fine"
they lie
when inside they
are crying
"I'm fine"
is always the last thing
on their mind
Desprately clinging
to that line
"I'm fine"
Fine is the word
that rolls from the tongue
before anything else
be it the painful truth
Or the sweetened lies
Fine is alway the catch all
its what we all hide behind
We're Fine
9-7-04
Raven Marie Shadows
Literature
The 3 Types of Bad Poetry
The Preteen Love Haiku
I thought I loved you
But then you were mean to me
So now I hate you
The "Original" Love Song
It feels just like lightning
This feeling so frightening
It feels like a fire
This burning desire
You say that you love me, but I love you more
No one in the world's ever felt this before
T r U e A r T
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The image behind this haiku popped into my head on the way to work this morning; by the time I arrived I had it pretty much worked out. I included "haiku" in the title because I have a few vague ideas about expanding on this thought at a later (but hopefully not much later) date.
Comments welcome, as always! Hope you like it.
Edit, Apr 2004, Preview: I am currently working through my gallery and providing a " proper" preview image for those deviations that didn't originally have one. I apologise to all those watching me if this causes these old poems to be flagged as "new". The image in this thumbnail is from stock - storm drive, by ~dkittystockage.
I am led to believe that the kanji characters read "haiku"; if anybody knows differently, please let me know.
Comments welcome, as always! Hope you like it.
Edit, Apr 2004, Preview: I am currently working through my gallery and providing a " proper" preview image for those deviations that didn't originally have one. I apologise to all those watching me if this causes these old poems to be flagged as "new". The image in this thumbnail is from stock - storm drive, by ~dkittystockage.
I am led to believe that the kanji characters read "haiku"; if anybody knows differently, please let me know.
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mmm...lovely..have you been on haikuyear ?