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Quatrain Contest DarkPhoenix 5

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It shows in what i do, and how i stand:
last week i fell in love with a rubber band;
if they take me to the beach i count the sand.
If you're crazy and you know it, clap your hand!
It's funny where your thoughts lead you. I started this with a particular line in mind, thrashed out the other three to match, changed a few things, swapped the order, nothing seemed to make it work quite as I wanted it.

Till I dropped the 's'! :-)

Edit, Apr 2004, Preview:
There are five poems in this series:
:bulletred: Quatrain Contest #1
:bulletred: Quatrain Contest #2
:bulletred: Quatrain Contest #3
:bulletred: Quatrain Contest #4
:bulletred: Quatrain Contest #5

I am currently working through my gallery and providing a proper preview image for those deviations that didn't originally have one. I apologise to all those watching me if this causes these old poems to be flagged as "new". For this thumbnail I have made use of the following images:

:bulletgreen: Shells-1, by ~ttwm-stock.
:bulletgreen: Stock77, by ~Odessa11stock.
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Mousewolf's avatar
*Claps her hand* Bravo!